Wednesday, February 14, 2007

The Gray Moon

A Renga Style Haiku

when the sun fell down
pieces of deep hot yellow
made me a cartoon

then i crept away
to decide what i should do
really quite confused

i asked the gray moon
who went on and on for hours
explaining daydreams

which made for nice company
but missed the point entirely

i dodged my eyes toward
the sound of the wind whistling
which made me happy

then i looked away
and saw a nimbus cloud wave
to a star that burst

he shyly giggled
when he noticed me watching
so of course i winked

if only the moon could see
what he misses from talking

2 Comments:

At 7:04 PM, Dan said...

That is a very nice poem! I'm glad yo u shared it with us. I like the last line about if only the moon would see what he's missing from talking.

 
At 9:59 PM, Lauren said...

I get it. I like it. Wow you are so brilliant.

 

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